The four seasons in a are spring,summer,autumn and my favorite season is use the weather is good and the coulds are beautiful . I love use is have many food. What about you?
修改後：
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. And my favorite season is autumn. Because the weather is cool and the coulds are beautiful. I love autumn.
修改老師：Crystal 老師
五年級:星碩