Dear Paul, I have a good friend in name is Lin is 15years favorite hobby areplaying basketball,swimming and so he doesn't like to play Ping-Pong birthday ison January likes eating chicken when his birthday came I think he is healthyvery use fruites and vegetables are good for doesn't like to eat ice-cream favorite subject is English,because he thinks it's e are his information. If you want to make friends with can call his telephone number is 0797-365421. So much about my friend,Lin you like him? Yours, Bill
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Dear Paul,
I want to introduce you my best friend. His name is Lin Tao who is 15 years old. He likes playing basketball, swimming and so on. But he doesn't like to play Ping-Pong. His birthday ison January 16th. He likes eating chicken, fruit and vegetables. So he is very healthy. He doesn't like to eat ice cream. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it's interesting. Do you want to make friends with him? You can write to let me know and we can play together next time. Yours,
Bill
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