Jasper makeup into a tree falling 10000 green silk ng.A word that contains life,at this uets of flowers and piles of a person a kind of good feeling。 ！Spring morning breathe fresh air,Looking at the beautiful scenery outside the window let peopiebecome enlightened at once，refreshed. Every spring side wild flowers,Rose in the yard，Peony in the tood in full bloom. I like the eagle cannot do without the sky. Iardently love a child's love for his mother's en think of spring can come earlier lyA little impossible. Oho！ beautiful you me think of you all the me look forward to you every moment. spring!A colorful season.
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Spring is a word that contains life. Springisthestartforayearasdawnisforaday. In spring morning, I can breathe the fresh air. And then I lookat the beautiful scenery outside the window which refresh meat once. Every spring,flowers along the roadside,roses in the yard,peony in the field and all the flowers arestanding in full bloom. What a colorful season! I like spring, like a child's love for his mother's arms. How beautiful spring is. Let me hug you in my arms.
修改老師：Crystal 老師
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