At Christmas
I want to have a lot of fun at Christmas.
First , I buy so many many present and buy a nice Christmas tree .
Next , I put some pretty things on the Christmas tree and put some presents under the tree.
Then, Christmas Eve comes. I put a stocking on my bed and wait for my presents : “ I want to some storybooks , I want to a nice car , I want to a Father Christmas...”
Finally, it is Christmas Day! I wake up early and open my so many many presents . I have a big dinner. my family and I eat a big turkey and some Christmas pudding .
I am happy , my family are happy too . I like Christmas. What about you? Do you like Christmas?
Ji yang experimental primary school
The class 1, grade five Li Mengyue Instructor: Yin Xiaohua
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At Christmas
IwanttohavealotoffunatChristmas.
First , Iwant to buya lot of presents including aniceChristmastree .
Next , I want to put some pretty things on the Christmas tree and put somepresents under the tree.
When Christmas Eve comes, Iwill putastockingovermy bed and wait for my presents, such as some storybooks, a nice car, and so on.
On Christmas Day, I want togetupearlyandopenall mypresents. In the evening,We willhave a big dinner.I want to eat a big turkey and some Christmas pudding.
I think I will be happy on that day. I like Christmas. What about you? Do you like Christmas?
五年級:李夢月