The beautiful spring, I love you. What? Are you beautiful, so lovely. You are a problem for revival is. Awaken your coming, the flowers and grass, trees and get out of bed. I love you spring, I love you in the spring. How I want to hug you ah.
修改後：
The beautiful spring, I love you. You are lovely. You are a season for revival. Spring is colorful. The flowers bloom. Grass and trees turn green. I love spring. It is warm outside, and I can go and play.
修改老師：Crystal老師三年級:書王智慧