Hi,My name is ish names Henry.I is china favorite season issummer.I can eat ice cream.I can wear t-shirts.I can't drink too much cold favorite season is about you?
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Hi, my name is Lufeng and my English name is Henry. I am a Chinese boy. My favorite season issummer because I can eat ice cream andI can wear T-shirts.I like summer very about you?
修改老師：Crystal 老師
五年級:盧峯