會考英語作文範文及點評：自由作文1

【習作要求】

Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.

內容要點

1．四個季節中任選一個季節。

2．被選季節的特點（氣候、時間、事物、活動等）。

3．人們在此季節所從事的活動。

4．作者自己喜愛的活動和感受。

【參考範文】

I like winter best. Though it is very cold, it is good for skating. I often go skating on Sundays with my father. When it snows, everything turns white. Trees and houses are covered with thick snow. How beautiful the world looks! My friends and I like to make snowmen. Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. That's a very interesting game. I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.

【名師點評】

這是一篇描寫季節的文章，文章難度一般。要求從自己的角度描寫季節和感受季節。應注意以下幾個問題：

(1)確定全文的時態。此文一般選用一般現在時。

(2)除了對季節的描述，一定要有自己的見解，這是得分的重要內容和關鍵所在。

作者用流暢的語言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表達清楚，結構緊密。