Spring is coming silently. The sun smiles so happily that I feel life is breeze touches my face 's so beautiful that birds can't help singing make me fascinated and refreshed to see the world is turning is the warmest welcome by nature. Look!The fish in the lake seems more active,dancing e,they won't be afraid of cold in winter. Smell and listen!"What smells so fragrant？“You will ,they are flowers which are extending their pretty and exciting!Can you imagine picking the ripe and heavy peaches and pears several months away?And who are busy amony the pink and white flowers now?The bees and butterflies,which are singing and dancing like spirits!They are guiding you towards spring. Feel!Please close you eyes and feel!Hug in spring!
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Spring is coming silently. The sun shines so brightly that I feel the life is so wonderful. The breeze blows gently over my face. It's such beautiful spring that birds can't help singing songs. I am excited about watching the world turning green. This is the warmest welcome by nature. Look! The fish in the lake are dancing everywhere a deep breath, I can smell the fragrance of the flowers and the fresh air in spring. How pretty and exciting! Listen, who are flyingamong the pink and white flowers now? The bees and butterflies, which are singing and dancing like fairies! Close your eyes and feel the spring!
修改老師：Crystal老師
高一:殊寒