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英語如何寫出會考高分作文(下)

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英語如何寫出會考高分作文(下)

閲讀電視廣告詞:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據提示,寫一篇60-80詞的短文。

 提示:

1.生活離不開水。

2.可飲用水在減少。

3.水污染嚴重。

4.應保護水源,再利用水。

點撥與參考答案

A. [思路點撥]:

①文體:記敍文。

②時態:一般過去時態,一般現在時態。採用正反對比的寫作手法,增加感染力。

③寫作目的:告訴讀者保護環境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of y day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the times they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook dangerous it ily,great changes have taken place ists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the these changes make us very happy.

  B. [思路點撥]:

①夾敍夾議(説明現狀,談談感想)。

②時態:一般現在時態。

③廣告詞的含義——水很重要,應保護和再利用(寫作意圖)。

Water is very important to can’t live without water we can drink is some people don’t seem to care about waste a lot of pour dirty water into rivers and r pollution is getting more and more we must do something to stop the not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.